Not bad, why soo much space in the foreground though, the brightness of the square is very very distracting. Crop Tighter andf you should have a much better image (in my opinion).
Would love to see you EXIF data though, not very clear a shot here, but it still works, thought about making this a monochrome shot with a touch of sepia and noise?
It's funny but I think this would be an even better image down from if you cropped off their head and chests. Strange thing to say I realize but I think it could give a powerful sense anonymity of the business person. If you know what I mean?